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Happy and Sad

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They, together, make me:

Sad as a jelly baby
That's had its head bitten off
Sad as an autumn leaf
That's trodden on and can't escape the rain
Sad as an umbrella caught in the wind.

But He, alone, makes me:

Happy as a forest lake
Reuniting with its raindrop friends
Happy as a sunflower
Opening her face to the glittering rays
Happy as the mouse that escaped the trap.
A little something I cooked up in creative writing class yesterday. We had to write a 12 lined poem that uses similies to contrast Happy and Sad, which is what I did. :D

Since I've become obsessed with it lately, I sort of had Glee in mind when writing this - it doesn't have to be about Glee, though. I had in mind a Mercedes/Kurt/Blaine love triangle, but really this could mean anything. I love the similies it helped create, though, so yeah.
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Nisa-chan666's avatar
i like the jelly baby simile. it made me smile, although i suppose it wasn't meant to